Re: To burn my heart
Please see the fantabulous article in OLE POETRY FOR 21st CENTURY
PRAGMATIC APPLICATION in which I rationalize in characteristic pure
banality how "good fences make good neighbors," the harsh, frosty,
bottomline has not exactly been demonstrated around the West Bank &
Gaza.
The following incongruent, profoundly shallow analysis is taken from
MORE RANCID EXPLANATIONS FOR THE POETRY-CHALLENGED by your semi-wit of
letters:
To burn my heart out for my love
Each day, each night, each dawn, each evening
To seek the treasures up above
And conquer all that is deceiving
<Suggestive of a love note>
To burn my heart out every day
And in the night it to replenish
Means catching forces as they play
And making them serve what I cherish
<reinforces profession of luv>
Burn, my heart, burn: You're still alive
Embrace the essence of each minute
>From it eternity derive
And find all that's contained within it
<Divorce papers served tomorrow..not>
Bring it to sunlight, make it bloom,
Twist past and future into present
Make it eternity consume
And let it blossom, iridescent
<A botanical metaphor or simile>
In minute - tear it, mold it, burn
Fill it with incandescent passion
Make it scream shattered; make it yearn
For rapture - give it a concussion
<Say it quickly & loudly with glassy flowers, not exactly copyrighted
by Florist Telegraph Delivery 1933>
That it would break and spill its core
And, broken, blend into forever -
My heart! Beat faster, I implore
And every minute do dissever:
<Dr. Michael DeBakey, please call your answeing service>
Course time like lifeblood through my veins,
Wring truth from it and make it feed me
Flush out the rest - all that remains -
And make truth bleed - yes, make it bleed me
<truth corpusles>
Until I'm dry and, like dry wood,
I burn with passion of the minute
For all that's true, for all that's good,
And for love as my eyes have seen
<won't smoke like wet wood>
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